If I could have a superpower, it would be a teleporting.
If I could teleport, I would go everywhere. First, I will go to Je-Ju island. I don't even need a passport. I will go to Seouguipo and eat a lot of mandarins. The mandarins of Seougipo are very delicious.
Second, I will go to canada and buy a lot of maple syrup. I will teleport to the closest market and buy a hole box. Then I will teleport to korea before I get caught to the police. I may not have a passport.
Third, I will go to japan and steal a synthesizer. I want to play it. I once see a synthesizer playing video, I was astonish. But that synthesizer was too expensive. So.. I just want to play it for a week then give them back. I want to play the steel guitar too. It is a guitar but I have to use the electric. So it is more interesting.
Fourth, I will get a job for a world delivery and earn a lot of money. If you order a book you will get it after a minute. Then I will be the greatest and famous delivery worker, so I can have more money then Bill Gates.
Fifth, I want to travel the country. I will go every where and play all day. Then I will do a world travel. I will first go to america, china, guam, hawaii, singapore etc.. there is no place that there I can't go.
I will be very happy if I have this power thing.
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Wow! This is a GREAT entry!! Your paragraphs are good, you told the story in the first person (I/me/my/etc.), and the spelling and grammar are pretty close to accurate.
Also, you have some good ideas. Traveling, instant book delivery, mandarins of seogwipo: all are very unique. I never would've thought of instant book delivery!
As your teacher, I must mention that, if you were as rich as Bill Gates, you could afford to BUY the synthesizer , rather than steal.;) But, at least you gave it back. That's good. :)
Remember to capitalize proper nouns (Japan, Canada, China, Guam, America).
"I once see a synthesizer playing video, I was astonish."
Change to:
"I once saw a synthesizer playing video: I was astonished!"
Other than that, excellent!
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